I love your poem... but trust me its worse when you find that person and he is already taken...im sure that u will find him, and i could ALMOST promise you that it just may be your bestfriend. i know a little about that too. well good luck with your search.

love always,
Jessica

Wonderful! ^_^... a very beautiful written poem... I enjoyed reading this very much... I know how you feel, but one day we will all meet that special person... But don't try to find love dear, let love try to find you... Best wishes...Loved reading it.. keep up the good work 5/5....

Oh my gosh i loveee this poem!!! it reminds me of myself in a way.

She wears a fake smile,
to cover up the pain.
if no one can see it,
no one will no its driving her insane.
she goes everyday,
pretending she's full of joy.
^ This part of this poem is amazingly written. It has superb atmosphere and I like it very much.

but when she comes home,she cries,
because she's tired of being played like a toy.
why cant she find the right guy?
that will treat her like a queen.
one that loves her so much,
like in the movie scenes.
the perfect cinderella,
with the perfect Mr. right.
^this part is bad. I don't like it. Wording isn't good and you did not expressed emotions very well.

someone who will hold her close,
every day and every night.
one day she wishes to find him,
and keep him close to her heart.
they'll be together forever,
and together they'll never part.
^This part of poem is o.k. It is good but it could be more better.

This poem has excellent moments but it still deserves 4/5.

Loved this one as well its just missing something i just cant think of it it has a great flow 5/5

Nice poem. i can relate. 5\5

Once again another well penned poem. I also fake my smiles when I'm sad :(

Anyway I think the flow was okay, I have one suggestion though.. try to put it into stanzas =)

Nonetheless a good read.

Awww i like this poem.. it's a question every girl wonders about and you did a good job putting the feeling into words.. nice job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

When I first read this poem, it
was so sad. It touches my heart.
This is so real, and true. I like this
piece of yours. Thanks for commenting
my poems. :)

Aw, sad and sweet. Excellent poem becuase its somethign that people, almost all people, can relate to. male and female, lots of guys feel that too.. except they don't want to be made to feel like queens of course. I could really feel for this poem. i liked the ryhmes, It was easy to read and the flow was good too.
keep it up 5/5

Good poem. That sounds just like me. Everyday i have to wear a fake smile to cover
up th pain.
Every time i think i find he
something goes wrong.Evernight i have to cry myself to sleep always tring to find the right guy. but i dont think i ever will.