I started reading it and couldnt stop and wasnt sure what is was about but than i saw it was an Acrostic and i saw Cancer and it was so sad. This was very well written. I really liked it. The flow was perfect!

Keep it up.
Xx Chrissie

Awwwwwwwwww i loved it!!

WOW...U r such a talented writer.

It's been a long time since a read and commented your poems.. yet, it's still as wonderful as before... No, it should be more wonderful and well written!~ Really love your poems!~ =D

Ok,back to the poem.. I felt quite sad when it says death on the way..Then it's even sadder when i read till the last sentence.I looked back at the peom and i read "CANCER"
Awwwww~~~~~ sad,but nice! Really!~

Flawless acrostic. I truely enjoyed reading this piece and its a pleasure to rrc this piece. Truely amazing. 5/5 all the way

Lexically and poetically strong

Tc
Fsams

I like how you chose those words.
very creative :)

Wow.
That's got to be one of the best acrostics that I have EVER read.
The emotions were strong && it was very dark. :] I love it. Fabulous job. 5.5 :} Keep writing!

- Stephyy <3

My girlfriend has cancer I wish she could see this but in a way it would be too harsh for her to read. And in that way it is so accurate.
Have to add you to my favourites you have some brillant work

E delahay

Beautifully written, and so powerful.
I can't get enough of your poems and your quotes.
Lol, I even added you to my favourites.=)
You're very talented.
Great work!
-Neha

Look i really do love this poem it is so beautiful, you are so talented and i just thought you might want to know

Your poems always seem to touch me in the deepest recesses of my heart, and this one is no different. I will forever stand in awe of your poetic ability. Beautiful...

An amazing piece that really does discribe cancer from the prey's poing of veiw.. A really uniqe piece that stands out amongst the rest.. =)

This was truely amazing. wonderful poem.

Wow. That just blew me away! The emotion, the imagery, the depth, it was all just flawless. The more I read from you, the more I am impressed. Well done *5/5*

By the way, your quotes are amazing too :]

Absolutely brilliant poem. Going in my favourites.

Wow.
Amazing
I loved this acrostic b/c its true and it relates very well to the word. Great job

Tis a very good poem nicole, always did like acrostics, and you did excellent with this one, portrays such sadness, love the flow and your choice in vocab is great, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Ya i added you to my favorites too. this was so sad. my cousin has cancer.. she entered remission, and we threw a big party for her, and 3 months later its back and worse before..
anyways.. i loved the poem. way good.

I dont see many acrostics that rhyme, to be honest. Therefore, It comes to the degree where I don't like them.
You did very well this this, and twisted it into a different sort of perspective, persay. I really enjoyed the complex vocabulary with the simple message. It got to the point, which was needed. I'm really very fond of this poem.

Brilliant job.

This is so good.
my uncle recently died of cancer
so i know how completely true this poem it.
good job :]