This is fantastic my favourite out of your sonnets, yeah i thought that 8th line sounds familiar but i couldnt remember where i had seen it till i finished your sonnet here lol good job and thx for the comment

can wait for your new set of sonnets :):)

keenan

Really good sonnet ....u write so well...good job

ashleigh

"no happy ending, pain is all I dwell,
and sadness is all that I have to give."
`This couplet is so sad, it relatively touched my heart.

You have, yet again, written a gorgeous sonnet, Bryan. In fact, its contents and theme (an unrequited love) endears me exceedingly. I further adored reading sonnets, and I believed you did it justice. :)

An endearing work, nonetheless.

Take care,
Debbie Cakes

Bryan
You have done a wonderful job on this set of Sonnets. The imagery is excellent as is the story line.

I sit here reading broken fairytales,
I feel like everyone of them I live,
no happy ending, pain is all I dwell,
and sadness is all that I have to give.

How sad these lines are. Really tug at the heart.
Take Care your friend Cindy

Sweetie, this was an amazing piece. Yet again you have written an amazing piece. I truely did love reading this I found the emotions to be portrayed into quite stunning depth. The flow flawless as always. Keep up this beautiful work Ive loved all your sonnets so far =]

~mel