Forever Sweet Dawn {{haiku}}

I wouldn't have necissarly said "Flames" at the beginning, but this is a really beautiful Haiku. Simple, but the wordings perfect.
Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSucidex 5.5

This honestly was quite the perfect haiku to tell you the truth. The description was vivd and painted a beautiful picture in my mind. What more can I say then well done on writing such an amazing piece of poetry. ~mel

You're really good at writing this type of poetry! keep it up!

Hey, i like it. I love to writing hikuo's (i cant spell) and that. It's fun.