You will find your right love in time! Don't give up! 5/5

I love the last stanza of this poem. Great first poem. The first couple stanzas it feels like you worked to hard to make it rhyme. Just loosen up and write. You could really go far with your talent!

Good job this poem was really sweet i liked it alot keep up the good work 5/5

Hey for your first poem its great ...read my first poem the day i died .. i think it sux