The Story

by Pennie   Jul 9, 2007


Its there
& i can't make it go away
Its killing me
& i can't make it stop
Piece by piece
Its cutting me
Going in deep...empty
Coming out full
Like a blood thirsty vampire
It drinks until i am sucked dry
Then it leaves me
In a ca strophic amount of pain
That won't go away
No matter
How hard to wish
When it comes back
To cut me
As deep as it can
& leave
With a mouthful
The pain gets worse
I am more scared of it
I lose more hope
Everything around me
Gets darker...
But if time goes by
If I'm patient
I will get older
Then
I wont have to hear
Either side
Of the story

(Written by a friend and revised by me)

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  • 17 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    Very interesting... A lot of emotions and deep thoughts...I loved the flow, imagery...I loved it ^_^...Hope you make more poems for I look forward to reading more of your work... Keep writing I give it a 5/5....

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow such a deep poem for someone so young...i hope that this poem isnt something that your going through..but i loved the poem..good job!

    ~michelle~

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    YOU FINISHED YOU FINISHED YOU FINISHED
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    hey girl great jod love the beat really good
    hope that you get some more poems because you are gooooood

    Bye Bye
    sam mayo