Comments : The Story

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    YOU FINISHED YOU FINISHED YOU FINISHED
    WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW
    hey girl great jod love the beat really good
    hope that you get some more poems because you are gooooood

    Bye Bye
    sam mayo

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow such a deep poem for someone so young...i hope that this poem isnt something that your going through..but i loved the poem..good job!

    ~michelle~

  • 17 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    Very interesting... A lot of emotions and deep thoughts...I loved the flow, imagery...I loved it ^_^...Hope you make more poems for I look forward to reading more of your work... Keep writing I give it a 5/5....