Fall To Pieces

by Andrew Morton   Jul 9, 2007


You're the saddest person
that i'm ever gunna meet
you've become everything
i said i would never be

you should be there by now
what are you waiting for
stop crawling through windows
and open the f-cking door

you bathe in your self pity
knowing you'll never be clean
so towel yourself off
get up from your knees

you put up that front
thinking others wont see
you must think im stupid
cause your not fooling me

you're lying to yourself
deceiving your mind
let go of your past
and leave it all behind

look me in the eyes here
listen close to what i say
im finally done with you
and its starting today

im getting tired of you
and all your excuses
so i smash my reflection
and i fall to pieces

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  • 16 years ago

    by girlnextdoor

    Best poem I've read yet on this site. Why have you stopped writing?! you're amazingly talented

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    You can really feel the frustration and dissapointment in this poem. You created a peice with great depth and emotion. I was drawn in from this first line to the last. I loved how it ended, it was perfect. Pretty much flawless. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by sara

    Amazing poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    This is phenominal! I love everything about it. I wouldn't change a thing. It's written so smooth, so well. 5/5 Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Wow, this poem is amazing... I take back what I wrote before... this is my favorite of your poems... good work... The words are great... everything is just amazing about this poem... you can really picture it all, it's just very sad, you can see the person described... well done :-)

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