Sweet Dreams, Darling (Double Tanka)

by Mommy And Me   Jul 9, 2007


Sweet Dreams, Darling {Double Tanka}

Upon her roof top;
Searching the forbidden stars
She cries out his name.
As his soul reaches the sky,
With out telling her good bye.

She wallows in grief;
Hearing a voice off inside,
Saying "it's all right."
And wiping her blackened cheeks
She whispers "sweet dreams darling."

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Tanka
Tanka is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku with five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables. (5, 7, 5, 7, 7)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Wow, i thought this was very good
    it was short
    but in just a few lines it was amazing

    The ending was great
    nice poem

    5/5