So far so good can't wait for the rest
cy

So far so good can't wait for the rest
cy

Wow what a sad and beautiful poem, the flow and simple words add flawless meaning. The last stanza is my favourite. 5/5 sure.

Well... i understand yah ur feelings.. like some broken hearts made this way,,including me hehe! i guess this is very normal situation in terms of love sometimes it hurts but i know that everything happens has a reasons so just go with the flow..

nice emotion... love it 5/5!

This is a very sad, and relatable poem... very well written and I can really relate to the situation... sad and beautiful... keep writing!! now i'm off to read the sequel :-) 5/5!

I loved the emotion you put into this...the sadness, the pain...It was very well written...Hope you find again what you had once lost...Love does hurt, but never give up on love...Good luck...and keep up the good work...5/5 ^_^

You could have just told me
That you love someone else
I could have let you free
For your loving "someone else"

^This stanza I didn't care for. Mainly becuase the flow is forced it seemed with the 2nd and 4th line ending with someone else.

Well the poem was very sad, but very well done. I must admitt though the flow was a little shaky. Most of it seemed to be forced rhymed. Other than that. Well done. I'm so sorry if this has really hapepnd to you. Keep your head up. God Bless 5/5
<3Tay

I really loved ur poem most because i can relate 2 it in my own way, but it was great reading this poem, 5/5 :-)

Poem. it was short yet you got your point across with no problem. the only thing i can see that i would change is some of the wording, some lines just dont seem to "fit" ya know. but all in all great poem.

Why did you leave me
Without telling me the reason

^^^my favorite lines b/c i know the feeling all to well^^^

keep up the good work.

What a beautiful sad poem.
Nice flow and great word choice.
Great piece of writing.
Take care

I really enjoyed this poem, for the most part.

the only part that could be a little bit better was in the middle:

"You could have just told me
That you love someone else
I could have let you free
For your loving "someone else""

i feel like you need to rearrange the words or find a different way to state one of the lines talking about loving someone else. it seems to disrupt the poem a bit.

otherwise it's very good! i like it a lot.

Wow this is really good can i can relate to this very much. you did such a great job writing it. but in some spots it seemed like you forced rhyming, but other then that it was great! 5/5

~Kristina

This poem and Part I of this poem were probably my favorite poems of your I've read so far. These are excellent pieces. They are well penned, and filled with emotion. The heartbreak and lost love of the poem is so emotional, it makes me want to read more! Great piece

5/5

In the end did you mean world or what you wrote. because if you meant word, i think you should make it words, it would sound better. as for the poem, nicely done. the flow was nice, as was the rhyming.

I thought it was pretty good, exept for the fact that you used "some one else" twice in the same stanza. All together i thought it was good, 5/5

Wow, that's amazing! your word choice was perfect. the flow was flawless, and the rhyming was great. i absoluelty love the last stanza...
"You made me feel special
You made my world real
And now you ignore me
Making my word surreal"
that was so beautiful...
great job!
5/5

~Sandra

Excellent i really like that it makes you truly look forward to the next installment!!

I like it...It was deep....Had a lot of emotion

The first stanza was a great hook....

Good Job...Overall 5/5

You could have just told me
That you love someone else
[[Due to grammar, you could fix it two ways, but the way the rest of the poem is set in, this line should read: "That you love{d} someone else."]]

Otherewise.
Hm.
Now, I can understand where you're coming from about this because I've felt the same way, or how you wrote you felt, but I didn't get any emotion from this; I didn't feel your pain or regret.
Sorry. =/.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!
why? because i can relate, i truly can, OMG im going to read the rest.