Awesome, very catching poem with creative use of lexis and meaning. Still there is room for improvement like making the 1st line more grammatical.

suggestion:

Her self esteem has reached outstanding high,

However it is 5/5 for sure :)

TC

The world below of manured grass.
[[I really just don't like the word "manured". It sounds so =// I don't know. Maybe it's just me.]]

She thinks it's wrong to be so beautiful,
[[I don't know why, but I LOVE this line. =)]]

Passion of confusion, oh what a twist.
I believe she's the next one on my list.
[[And again, I don't know why, but I love the ending. It was perfect and though I'm not sure why you switched view point "she" to "I", I like the unnatural twist. Lovely line.]]

And so forth. I love the whole thing. One of my more favorites out of the ones I've read simply because of the last line and capturing ending. You'd be surprised how much the ending does for you.. =)

xTheEcstasyofSucidiex 5.5