Love this poem keep up the good work!

Hmmm....
It was very dark && depressing... :} I like it.

"Pain pierces through my stomach;
a sharp dagger digs right in and never leaves.

How can such a pain live inside of me;
it turns and toils till i can't see"

^ Gah... I love those lines right there. Wonderful job. :] 5.5

- Steph <3