I usually don't give a 5/5 to a poem so very short, but this piece was really fantastic. The words are so powerful and they grab you with such force. I can't give this poem anything but 5/5 Amazing job GG23 |
by Fsams
Very few lines with great imagery and meaning. Wel adhered to the rule an d well penned. Tc |
by Debbie
I do love a good Diamante. =] |
by unknown
I typed word "diamante" at search box, and only found 2 poems. And yours is better than the other. |
by Teria
Wow. |
by Wallace
Lol, nice poem and yea the discription of the style was longer than the poem. |
by Verity Han
Fantastic adjectives and formatting (though its already fixed...). I especially liked all the short, powerful words you used such as "feverent" and "scintillating". Bravo! |
by Becca
That was really good. You put a lot of thought into it. I can't seem to follow rules when it comes to the different types of poetry. The best I can do is a sonnet. So great job and I really loved the depth of this poem. |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Amazing! I like how you used the words loved&decieved.Keep writing like that.It was really really good.5/5 |
by Melpomene
You know, I really love this style of poetry it's most interesting but I never find many people who can actually pull them off and deserve a 5/5 with them. This is exactly what you did though. I found the vocabulary to be really effective and strong. A good read. Well done.~mel |
I love it. It is so different from other poems that i have read. 5/5 |
by Hebe
Great poem. |
by nikki
Wow. i love this type of poetry. it was amazing and i loved the words you used. great work 5/5 |
"lol that was longer than the poem." -- Lmao! Sorry, that made me laugh. =/ |
by Gem
Ooo, i love these fomats and the vocab you have used for this one is fantastic! |