Your poem is very romantinc. an excellent piee of love poetry. words shows thier beauty in the feelings of true love. i loved your work.
you have talent. and onething ryming scheme was also good .

and you deserve 5/5
take care

Your poem is very romantinc. an excellent piee of love poetry. words shows thier beauty in the feelings of true love. i loved your work.
you have talent. and onething ryming scheme was also good .

and you deserve 5/5
take care