by Sydney
Oh that is really sad : [[ but really good! Your flow was nice and rhyming was good in most spots. It went a bit off in the middle but it wasnt extremely noticable. I think you did an excellent job and the emotion that you put into it was wonderful. I could practically feel every word. Wondeful job : ]] |
by Yourmyangel
Aww im sorry you feel this way..but everything will get better..i really liked this poem..the rythm was good..and you show so much feeling into it..it was an excellent poem!!! |
by Chrissie
I think thats pretty gooood. The flow was pretty good. The story was kinda heartbreaking, which means it had great emotion. I really enoyed this peice. |
by Fsams
Beautiful with nice wordings and crystal clear meanings. I can understand how much you are missing Kim in the light of this piece. A well deserved 5/5 |
Veryy well written. veryy amazing! && sweet of course xx |
by Angel
Loving someone is never stupid...but can be very painful. I am sorry you hurt...beautiful poem. |
by Nicole
I like the moral of this poem. |