Comments : Unalterable

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar

    Ohh.i adore this(=
    i can feel your sadness inside
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    So sad..:(...full of pain , and you can feel it reading your poem...great work ...keep it up
    5/5:) *Melody*:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    Wow... I loved the emotion in this and the tone (I could really feel it)!!!! Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by JiKaRiN

    How sad.. Every sad person could relate to this one. Very emotional..

  • 17 years ago

    by JiKaRiN

    That is so true.. You can't change the things you've done wrong.. I can relate to this one..

  • 17 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    WOW!!
    Really aweosme poem.... and little mindblowing... In short, your poems is cool, Keep up this good work :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    WOW!!
    Really aweosme poem.... and little mindblowing... In short, your poems is cool, Keep up this good work :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    YouR writinG seemS tO bE EXHILARATING...
    keeP uP yR gooD worK... moreoveR thx 4 yR kinD writinG..

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Hey nice one...pls read my poem (buztedangel)its somehow related to this one...goodwork..5/5