Second Hand Kiss (Acrostic)

by Jenni Marie   Jul 9, 2007


Show me the meaning of your love
Excite me with beautiful fantasies
Could this be more than just a fling?
Only, remember, I wont be second best
No, wont allow you to play us both for fools
Destroying each of us in the process.

Hold me a little closer to you
Always know that I'll be there
Never doubt my words, they are truth
Decision time now, me or her.

Knotting our hearts in a triangle, is something I'm against
Intoxicating us both with false promises something I wont stand for
Show me now, if it's me or her that you ultimately want
Sorry, you can't have both, I wont be second best.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    "No, wont allow you to play us both for fools"
    ^^ I think it should be something more like..
    " No, I won't allow you to play us both AS fools."

    For, just doesn't sound right for some reason, eh.

    And, sounds to me like the person in this poem is second best. :/ Both are, actually. To be played like that. Gahh. Men like that make me sick.
    Even though it's not like I've never done it, haha.
    But, not to an extreme extent; just liking two people... They didn't even know.
    Anyway, it's not about me. Lmfao.

    You wrote an amazing poem, dear.
    Great emotion, flow, and word choice.
    I think you deserve a 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by kellymarie

    Good for you, wish i had of given him that choice,the poem was well written well said,

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