Good for you, wish i had of given him that choice,the poem was well written well said,

"No, wont allow you to play us both for fools"
^^ I think it should be something more like..
" No, I won't allow you to play us both AS fools."

For, just doesn't sound right for some reason, eh.

And, sounds to me like the person in this poem is second best. :/ Both are, actually. To be played like that. Gahh. Men like that make me sick.
Even though it's not like I've never done it, haha.
But, not to an extreme extent; just liking two people... They didn't even know.
Anyway, it's not about me. Lmfao.

You wrote an amazing poem, dear.
Great emotion, flow, and word choice.
I think you deserve a 5.5