I really enjoyed this poem a lot, it was so smooth and the words were just fantastic. The imagery in the poem was also amazing because I could see everything so clearly. Definately a 5/5 GG23

Wow.. i really liked reading this. it has such powerfull words behind it :) good work.

Um first, i'm commenting both of your poems with this title, I saw the other one first and this one lol. so i didn't know which one to comment. Anyway, this one was also nicely written. The rhymes weren't the most orginal, rather simple I think. Nonetheless, you painted a great picture with words you used for the reader, even if they weren't spectacular. Still 5/5

marcella