Wow short but sweet i like the description 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Wow sammy...i like...short simple and to the point =]

Very good...and thanks for the comment:) 5/5

Oh I loved this one. It wasn't cliche what so ever. The word choice was strong and powerful that it hit my heart with each line I read. The length was great. Short and sweet went straight to the point. Well done on writing such an amazing read. Definitly worthy of a 5/5 in my eyes. Keep writing. ~Mel

Simple. but still so meaningful.
great poem. 5/5.

I like this short and simple and get straight to the point 5/5

Wonderful short and direct poem, no beating around the bush. Shorter poems are always the hardest to write - you need to get everything you want to get across in so few words/lines.
You did a great job of it on this piece, its like a little stick of tnt, small but packs a huge punch.

Really nice work.

~Pete.