I like it its very descriptive and well written i can relate i shudnt be so mean(lol) :) but very nice wurk!
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I love this poem. I think everyone can relate to it. being in love with someone, who just doesn't care for you.
Great job

Kris.

Great poem,
u have the gift,
continue to use it!

A good picture created of something we have all experienced or felt. Nice job.