by Debbie Jul 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Tossing away the ashes of youthful ferveur, |
by Miu
Very beautiful and outstanding. Everything is portrayed so well and also so sad. Vocabulary was very unique. Eventhough it was long didn't loose my interest in this piece. |
by Brittney
'Such tremendous confusion ripped them to shreds, |
by Leah20
I like this as well. It's my absolute favorite of yours, but it's still better than most others on this website. I think it was just that the rhyme scheme was a little funky. I still loved the imagery and vocabulary though. You are truly blessed with the gift of writing! |
Amazing.. keep it up the good work |
by Riley
Wonderful, extravagant, excellent, superb. |