I'd like to leave an echo
whispering softly down the
ways.

I really liked these lines! I think this poem represents in words what alot of people would want after their life is over. Great poem.

Take Care.

Short and very sweet poem. Very nicely expressed. Good poem.

I liked this poem. it was interesting
nice job!<3 emma

WOW you did a great job on this write, very nice and a pleasant one at that, love your happy thoughts , well written very nice,,, keep it up ,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Really nice poem about the life we leave behind us when we move on. Nice use of imagery in this piece. I think everyone wants to leave these things behind when we go .. although most don't want to think about it.

You made a poem about death and passing on, just about as beautiful as it can be.

Really nice work on this piece.

~Pete.

Anyone can do that is to leave behind and some don't. Like the view of imagery are perfect good choice of words to use. This is really nice and sweet to do posiitive ways.