I think it's a good song.
Especialy the second chorus was great, I think.
Good word choice.
One thing sometimes you did rhyme, sometimes not.
Besides that I'd love to hear the song when it's finished.
Take care

WOW!!!! This is sooooo beautiful, it's really... wow!!!! I liked it alot!!!!! Gr8 song, you have serious talent dude!!!
5/5 =D

WOW! I LOVE THIS SONG! I wouldnt be surprised if a famous band sang that song at all I loved it! it had tears running down my cheeks :)! Keep up the good work