Comments : Blink [Triolet]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    OH
    I adore this piece...
    The emotion is clear for the reader to sense, the opening line makes for a powerful opening with line there on getting better and better, flow is flawless throughout and the fact that this is a triolet is an added bonus for me.
    I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    This poem is beautiful... you are a great writer... very talented... 5/5