Andrew
Nice job on this piece. A really diffrent kind of poem. I like it :)

i'm pretty sure i'm winning the fight
with these battles between myself
these feelings of remorse are few
yeah, i'm really one of a kind

It would be nice if everyone could see therselves this way. It would be such a nice world to live in.
Great job Andrew.
Take Care Cindy

I frikken love this...
The imagery you portrayed in this piece was beautifully done, it created very vivid pictures for me, I thought flow was flawless throughout the entire piece, and I thought every line was very intense and full of power...you did a beautiful job on this piece.

You write and sound a lot like me! 5/5 This is very good!