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by Good Enough   Jul 9, 2007


Your blood pours into mine
As we lay here and die
Slowly but surely
We'll finally be gone

You'll have me to hold
In a place so magical
And we never have to leave
We'll always be together

Thats why I shot us both
To be in a place
Where we dont have to worry
About what shit people say

So slowly but surely
You and I pretty soon
Will be together
With no end

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chemically Corrupted

    I remeber when you wrote this peom. It was good then and it still is now! Keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Really, really good. Deep thought.

  • 17 years ago

    by Valiantpenguin

    Love it sweetie, it was really good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Great job. This piece of poetry was quite original - I've never read anything quite like it. It was filled with love. The flow was good && overall, you did a wonderful job. :] 5.5

    - Steph <3

  • 17 years ago

    by kalene totally fallin

    Good work

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