Haha, this one makes me laugh, but at the same time keeps me very interested.

I love its style!

Wow. This is very different from what i read on a day to day basis. I love the creativeness. Great Work! =]] & thanx for the comment

Great poem.
Like the flow.
Well done
Take care

Funnyy but very different from wut ive read has a great flow love it keep it up

xoxo
erin