Wow this is so greatly written a romantic and emotional poem..... keep it up dear.
you are amazing dear.

Great poem. :)
It's powerful. And the flow was very nice. It's getting stronger and stronger to the end. And you ended your poem well.
I think the title should be "you're", not "your". It made me confuse when I read it. But it doesn't matter. Well done. 5/5

Ya lol i know... i always do that with my you're and yours lately... lol and i'm always too lazy to change it but i'll do that, thanks. and thanks for the nice comment!

This is so beautiful.
Amazing work
really heartfelt, and full of emotion.
The rhyming is perfect, and it flows wonderfuly.
Ive added this one to my favourites!
definatly 5/5 from me.!!
Steph

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Miss Molly,

I really, really adored this poem. This was quite a sweet and beautiful dedication for the person you've dearly cherished in your heart; in truth, I find it utterly delightful to read.

How I favored these lines above all others!
"You're the love in my laughter that makes me walk tall... You're the push in my step, that always helps me follow through... You're the truth beneath the lies I'm forced to live with every day..."
`It's a wonderful thing to love and be loved, I believe. Don't you think? :] 5.0

Best wishes,
Marian

Life can get pretty hard at times and often it can really bring you down to the lowest of lows, but when you have the one you love beside you, it never seems to matter. Excellent job once again, very heartfelt 5/5 GG23

That always keeps me wanting more.
You're my WORLD in this World,
the one I live forever for.

my fave lines ^^

it was romantic and emotional, it was an awesome poem, the way you grasp the idea and just keep going with it, truly amazing, beautifully written. 5/5

The ending was perfect :) I like to tone in the poem :D Great vocab, flow was smooth. I enjoyed reading your poems, keep up the good work :D

Amazing. The flow was perfect and the vocab great:)
It really read true with the heartfelt emotion's you laced through these touching words.
It was a memorable read, and I loved every word.
Very much enjoyed,
Elaine.

Every word of this poem is like a treasure, so full of love!