by ├Truely_Spoken┤ Jul 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
© Francisco Guzman 2007 |
by dora
Omg this was soo good very well written! keep it up =D xx |
by Lia Jnell
This is an absolutely amazing poem sisco!!! definatly very emotional and i hope that you publish your works some time. you are an amazing writer... as i continually tell you, and your work is unbelievable!!! |
Wow!!! that was great. very beautiful |
by Wallace
Lol, nice poem, I found it a little hysterical actually. Only thing I could say is just watch your syllable count, how much syllables in a line, try not to have too many long lines or else it gets tyring for the reader to read, and i think thats what happened in the middle, but good job though, keep it up. |
by Cindy
Very unique. Great job on the imagery. Love the way you incorperated the Super Hero into your piece. |