Awwwwwww great poem 5/5 keep writing

Critical much?

Miss Molly,

I actually find this quite bitter and sweet at the same time; in fact, such remorseful sentiments embedded on this particular work of yours tugged my heart. It simply speaks of me.

"Should have let you know the truth,
babe you've always been the one.

I should have said I love you too,
should have said I needed you."

The foregoing couplets endears me exceedingly; in fact, it is comparable to my distressing notions in mind. Nice one, nevertheless. I gave you a 5.0, m'dear. :]

Best wishes,
Marian

It's funny how we always seem to solve the problem when it's just a little too late, we realize what we had and what we should have done. Excellent poem with great flow and imagery, the last stanza finsihed the poem very well. Nicely done 5/5 GG23

Uhh.. first of all this poem doesn't deserve to be down voted!

Anyway it was an enjoyable read :) I really like it.. I hope my ex feels the same way as you.. Flow was smooth, great vocab.

5/5 all the way!

Thank you very much all :-)

This was a great poem. i loved it. i like the flow...and the beat...good rythem. keep it up.

***ayshley***

This is very good too you are a amazing writer... I really love your poems...

This is very good too you are a amazing writer... I really love your poems...

I love your poems...there all are different but great this poem is another good one...=)>...5/5