This one hits home for me. Perfect rhythm and perfect rhyme. I like this one because I have explained this multiple times to friend because I used to be a Barbie doll, not only a mask, but all of me was plastic. 5/5

I really enjoyed reading this poem, so many people hide behind a fake smile everyday and we could go on forever never knowing the truth. The flow was great and the emotion was outstanding, excellent poem 5/5 GG23

Beautiful...i loved this poem. its so real, so full of emotion. the words the lines, simply surpurbe.

I hate living all the lies
The happy girl who never cries

this is my favorite lines...
thios poem really hits home becuse i know exactally how you feel.

keep it up

'we all wear masks' which is true, and i can totally relate to this, but I'd never tear my mask of. lol!
nice poem, I would have made it a little longer-but thats only me.
-shattered

Excellent work!!!! i can totally relate....most people are fake!!! and i love the way the whole poem flows line after line...great job!!! 5/5!!!

Very deep. a good write, getting a little close to the edge with pacing but you're still safe. great poem.

your servant:
david

This poem was simple but really effecitve, I liked the simple ryhme scheme I found it held strong emotions portrayed nicely throughout this entire thing. From start to end it kept me interested and was quite the amazing read. Im sure so many people can relate to this. Keep up the good work. Well done ~mel

I like this poem...I like the emotion it has in it and I could relate to how the poem is... You put it in the perfect way to explain how some people do feel that way... Keep on writing... 5/5 ^_^

That's great! I loved it!!! 5/5

Wow i love it.It was REALLY LOVELY and emotions are so intense maybe because i can somehow relate on what you feel.Great job.Keep it up 5/5

This was pretty good, very relatable as well, and you explained this feeling absolutely perfectly
it flowed smoothly as well
5/5
gabriella

Omg this poem is brilliant!! love it!!

WOW this is incredibly good.....nice job like it alot and say alot....very well writen...and good thought 5/5

This was beautiful. i think that everyone wears a mask of some sort, it not only protects them, it protects others. it is only those who see and accept both, that we can truely show our true selves to.

Amazing write, deserves a much higher rating.

5/5

Woah good flow. Good poem. Good in all. Your good. You gotta give me some pointers haha ^^

Amazing I know exactly how u feel. I'd probably really apretiate my poem serenade of a masquerade plz comment on that and if u have time my newest poem
thnks

Pretty good, but some of the stanzas were a little iffy

7/10

sorry =( but i had to!

Sorry but i had to rate this a 4.. this poem seemed a but rough. i think it felt a lil forced and it was kinda hard to follow.. but the story of it was really good. i live the same life and i know how this goes.. if this is true.. if i were u, jus try to be u. it is hard, but im learning that now to. best of luck

That was great, allot of people can relate to that

Wow I like this one.. reminds me of my lyric *Behind My Mask*
5/5 Nice work :)