Sending Out A Signal.

by ABake   Jul 10, 2007


Someone please help me, my life is fading fast.
I really need some guidance, or advice.
I wish I could move on, just let go of the past.

Someone please help me, heal this this shattered heart.
I really need some comfort, or a friend indeed.
I should have seen it, knew it right from the start.

I don't really need help, all I need is you.
How to get you back, I have not a clue.
Please help me, I don't know what to do.

With every tear that falls,I fall deeper in love.
How I wish this wasn't happening.
There has got to be something else for me to think of.

I'm sending out a signal, and patiently I shall wait.
Until the day that you return, I will long for your love.
Promise me your love for me won't turn to hate?

(It is kinda short, but instead of having four lines in each stanza, I used only three)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sydney

    Good one : ] A tad bit sad although its still awfully good. Different stanza use made it different and unique so I applaud you for that : ) Brilliantly done : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I like it :) a lot, and sometimes short and sweet iss great :) i gave this beautifull piece of art a 5/5 :)