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by Cherise Jul 10, 2007 category : Life, society / other
Goodbye my sweet demon You have followed me all these years All the time, In the back of my mind You chose to play tag with my fears And because of she, I'm gonna set you free For now on you pathetic child, You're let me be. May God be on your side may he take you for a ride and may he show you why he left your side. See this black cloud ? thats hanging above you? Wherever you may go, I hope that it follows you. For i have now found closure I patched this hole that was ripped, and i think once again ,that feeling of revenge has given you the slip. Goodbye my sweet demon You have followed me all these years You're no longer apart of me, You're no longer one of my fears.
by Stephanie Naylor
I thoguht this was a great poem it flowed well and i loved the rhyming it never seemed forced "Goodbye my sweet demon You have followed me all these years All the time, In the back of my mind You chose to play tag with my fears" faovrite part ^^ and i loved the ending nice job 5/5