Ohhhhh myyy god!!..this is one hell of a dark poem...it had me hooked ryt from the get go
ur a good poet gurl
keep up the gr8 writes
tk care
bree

Wow great poem it was scary but loved it keep it up!

Wow , i loved it, I love scary and dark things,keep posting poems, I will add u and this poem to my favorite auther and poem.;)

O.O Um...cool. I like it. A little on the choppy side. but not bad.

Wow this is so sad yet a beautiful written poem i dont kno wat to say but wow 5/5

OO Excellent job, i really enjoyed reading this poem XD

Its good poem <33

Ummm...i liked it i thought that it was cool how u rhymed (i cant rhym worth crap! hehe) but i think that its and interesting poem and i enjoyed it! 5/5...also i love ur quote that says "A mind full of fears a face full of tears"...anyways great job!