The flow of the words was great and the story it tells was always very deep. I liked it very much.
Your friend
Lisa Ann

Wow This was really incredible,great use of words and full of emotion.really enjoyed that!!! thankyou for your comment xlisax

Incredible and beautiful words. I feel the pain inside your poem.5/5 Love it ;-)

WOW..LOVED THIS POEM...ITS A COMPELING STORY BUT YET A POEM...EXCELLEND AND CAPTIVATING..THE FINAL 2 LINES SUMS UP THE POEM SO NICLEY...ALL AREOUND GREAT WORK 5/5 check out my latest "MY Doubts"

Great poem.
Deep emotions, good flow.

" Lady Lisa Sky I wish you the best of fate,
But after you used me, you just left me with a heart full of hate. "

Those lines, incredible.
Take care

I loved the ending you used here..very intense.
I liked the opening, it dragged me right into the piece and from there on it just got better...beautiful work.

The emotional depth was potent here. The subject matter was darkly realistic for someone experiencing addiction.

My only critisicm: it would make it more clear what feelings you were trying to convey if you proofread this. There are a few errors that give the reader pause trying to sort it out.

Great poem, it's a perfect tale of obsession. lady lisa sky.

Both, the drug and the woman, the woman behind the drug.

Wow..i dunno wether to laugh or feel sad..lolz...coz its kinda funny is some ways...although anguish feelings are there..

lolz..i cant stop laffin..

but ur poem is simply amazin...good job...tc..