I thought I was something.

I liked this poem because you could tell it was the truth, through your writing. you didn't try to make it perfect, you just wrote what you felt.. which is what a real poet should do :). 5/5, definitely. i wouldn't vote any differently.

- i would also like to say thank you for commenting on my poem. it was a poem that means a lot to me. so thank you very much.

i can't wait to read more of your stuff .

heidi b

Aww.so sad its depressing..i want to cry now..this poem had an amazing flow, i find your poems to be very great and each one has a great flow..i love them, you are deffinitally going in my favorites
<3love always and forever<3

Thats realli good.
the pain in this poem is genuine and when u have such deep feelings.. it makes a great poem.
keep up the great work
shell x

Such a sad poem, but very good. Keep on writing girl!

You like see me suffer,don't you?, should have a 'to' lawl, i really liked this the rhyme was good although the flow hesitated a few times, full of emotion and very sad, good work