Wow that was a truly great poem filled with definate emotion and truly original for a cut poem 5/5 maybe can read one of mine.

But then I realized something
you're telling lies like breathing air.

my fav lines
though i love the whole poem and now you are on my fav list
keep writing and hope you get your love and no one betrays you

Hoping to be your friend
Rohan

You like see me suffer,don't you?, should have a 'to' lawl, i really liked this the rhyme was good although the flow hesitated a few times, full of emotion and very sad, good work

Such a sad poem, but very good. Keep on writing girl!

Thats realli good.
the pain in this poem is genuine and when u have such deep feelings.. it makes a great poem.
keep up the great work
shell x

Aww.so sad its depressing..i want to cry now..this poem had an amazing flow, i find your poems to be very great and each one has a great flow..i love them, you are deffinitally going in my favorites
<3love always and forever<3

I liked this poem because you could tell it was the truth, through your writing. you didn't try to make it perfect, you just wrote what you felt.. which is what a real poet should do :). 5/5, definitely. i wouldn't vote any differently.

- i would also like to say thank you for commenting on my poem. it was a poem that means a lot to me. so thank you very much.

i can't wait to read more of your stuff .

heidi b