This poem speaks to me becuase this is how i feel sometimes but not all the poem is me...but thats because everyone is different i guess but i loved it =)

Noelle

WOW that was totally awesome, you captured my exact feelings and thoughts, I sometimes find myself doing the same thing, some how in a different world although I'm still here, never the less that was simply beautiful , wonderfully written and shows great talent in your ability to write , marvelous job , keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

Another great piece. Very descriptive of how dreams commonly are and you chose the right words. 5/5

Nice ideas,i like your thoughts and the way you presented it all in general...good job :)