WOW that was a great write love the way you look at the kids and admire them , wonderful job,

Stepping all over me
jumping up and down too
I groan but I smile too
these children are so wild.
keep up the good work, your friend Tracy d 5/5

To me, that made absolutely no sense, but I laughed anyway lol! I loved it 5/5! hehe
Sarah xxx

Lol sounds like fun no?
That was a pretty cool movie and its cool that you would write a poem about it!
and children seem to be the perfect fit for it!
thanks for tellin' me.

-shattered

It was truly hilarious!!

Lol.. Well done.. very humbly written about their simplicities. I liked this poem alot. xx

Hehehe lol great poem worth 5/5

Good potrayal of kids and the fun they have it sounds so true keep it up.

Good potrayal of kids and the fun they have it sounds so true keep it up.

Well this poem is different.. from what im used to reading haha.. but i like it alot.. good job
-Tylor

Lol this poems awesome... i love it =]

Haha funny!!!! 5.5