by firexdancer Jul 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A zipper closes with the ease of hate |
by Nix
Wow, so emotional and atmosphere is great. It is really deep and you expressed how you feel and still created vivid imagery. I enjoy reading it, it deserves 5/5 |
by Michelle18
Wow very beautiful poem...another great one..5/5 |
Oh my you're going on my fave list, you are so talented m'dear. 5/5 YET AGAIN! :) |
by Sydney
A drop of blood from lips pale white |
by David
Excellent description and skill throughtout this whole poem, sadness entwined to such a great degree. |