Beautiful imagery and feeling. The last 2 lines are especially fine :-)

I always enjoy coming to the nature section of this site. The poems here seem to be above the rest in most cases. I read your poem and found it quite interesting. Nice words and good flow kept my attention. I look forward to reading more of your works to see what appears when they are turned over. good job girls!!!

You two wrote such a beautiful, peaceful poem together. You guys definately meshed well, very nice. Awesome imagery, so colorful...

Wow!!! Beautifully written piece, it has wonderful atmosphere and imagery is superb. Well done! First, fifth and last stanza are my favorites, it deserves 5/5