Numb

by ECILA ice   Jul 10, 2007


Gun's trigger had been pulled
Resounding in every corner
Breaking the silence of the room

One Heart had been shot
Leaving a hole in her chest
Where crimson liquid start to lurk

But the pain she ignores
For her existence bleeds more
For she felt her world is in shambles

And instead of regrets
Smile still drawn in her lips
No tears had ever shed

Finally, in her own hands
She put an end on her own agony,
Hurt and aches she will feel no more

Clasping her own breathe
Sweet serenity she would finally find
At last forever she will become numb

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  • 17 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    This is great. you start the piece with really powerful imagery and just go from there. Again the simple language really suits this piece. i love it
    DnB

  • 17 years ago

    by EMOtional

    The first and the 4th lines are absolutely one of the best ones I've ever heard. Great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is really deep...i can feel the pain in the poem....i like it..5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    First, "But the pain she ignore", it should be "ignores, or ignored". Besides that it was a nice poem. You created great iimagery.

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    It painted a clear picture, I could see the shot. IT was beautiful but sad too. I really enjoyed it. 5/5 Keep up the good work

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