Wow, this poem is so powerful. Every line is excellently written, and it makes me wanna read it over and over again.
You're truly talented!
This piece has great choice of words and it creates vivid images in the reader's mind.
Third stanza is my favorite.
Keep up, 5/5 from me.

Damn, girl. That's beautiful.
I loved the metaphors and the thought you put into that. I usually pick my favorite line, but if I did here, I'd have to copy and paste the entire poem, because not one line is alone; they all work together. (Which is amazing that you kept flow like that. Niice.).
Seriously, this is amazing. No doubt full ratings.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5