Comments : Helpless

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    June dear, yet another inspirations write you portrait here....even though simply but well sending the message, "Remember, as you start this day and duty crowds your mind, that kindness comes so quickly back to those who first are kind. Let that thought and this one direct us through each day. The only things we ever keep are the things we give away."

    Best wishes, Bert.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh the story this told, was excellent, this is going on my favouries list, its that good.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Your poems are really inspiring, if this is still going on i would advise that you go against your son's wishes but don't tell him. if nothing gets better within a couple of weeks i would advise just switching schools, might seem drastic but otherwise your son is going to have the same scars you have. hm.....back to your poem i liked it although it wasn't split into verses which is how i usually like reading poems but it being one big paragraph worked as well it was like it all fitted in. anyway really cool poem