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by Mey   Jul 10, 2007


PLease someone comment me about this poem
I need help I am really caught up on a big mess
thank you

Like instant messages that come and goes
It feels my soul went you log off
I've lost my sleep thinking of you
waiting for you to log back in

This weird relationship
Is killing me inside
I have not clue how to react
I am caught up between our chats
I miss you dearly I miss you much
I want to feel you
touch you and hold you
I want to kiss you
I want you all
but life is unfair for those that fall in love

we are so far
So far away
I can not have you
and I will always want you
but my life is so full of people i cant keep through
I have my son and my baby daddy
have you have though about it
I cant not leave them
because my love for you
I think I SHOULD SAY
bye this is the end
I am sorry my love
I'll keep you in my heart
until the day I die

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mey

    With the poem I am so SORRY i DINT MAKE MYSELF CLEAR , but if u can give me advise on the situation too that will be great i would really apreciated it thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Gypsy

    Are you wanting help with the poem, or the situation you find yourself in?

  • 17 years ago

    by Mey

    Ok thank you is just that so much that I cnat even think anymore hahaha
    and I laugh funny thing

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Honestly its nice in some lines its cool.
    Some changes and it'll be great.good work.

    ~Christina~