Comments : Untitle[ please check on this poem ]

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Honestly its nice in some lines its cool.
    Some changes and it'll be great.good work.

    ~Christina~

  • 17 years ago

    by Mey

    Ok thank you is just that so much that I cnat even think anymore hahaha
    and I laugh funny thing

  • 17 years ago

    by Gypsy

    Are you wanting help with the poem, or the situation you find yourself in?

  • 17 years ago

    by Mey

    With the poem I am so SORRY i DINT MAKE MYSELF CLEAR , but if u can give me advise on the situation too that will be great i would really apreciated it thanks