I hate it by dian

by Dian PH   Jul 10, 2007


I felt sorry
when i knew you

you teach me how to love
but you hurt me true

i suffer so much
when i surrender to you

you show me how to cry
in a painful agony

how i hate my self
but still from the bottom of me
your the only one i can cherish

if i have magic to stop the time
through the past i correct my mistakes

to avoid to knowing you
so that i can able to smile up to now

if i can grab the falling star
i will do my best just to have one
to wish that i control the time

crying at my bed
cursing your name
why such you tear me that way?

believe on love as if that's true
from your mouth i learn
the lies hiding on you

leave me please cos i beg you
you hurt my pride and my dignity too
your the worst ever that i never knew

sorry to say such thing like these
you teach me how to fight
that's why i give you a fight

learning mistakes from you
especially to love a cheater like you

please goodbye don't come back anymore
cos if you dare i will hate you forever
till my last breath away

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    You show me how to cry
    in a painful agony

    i can say it si the phrase that touched me here

  • 16 years ago

    by Shelby

    I like this one
    (:
    and just to let you know.
    IM NOT A MAN!!!

    you commented on one
    of mine and said im a talented young man
    hah.
    im INSULTED.
    :P

  • 17 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I like you poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow another truly deep and descriptive poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Please goodbye don't come back anymore
    cos if you dare i will hate you forever
    till my last breath away

    Very strong and nice poetic lines emphasising you are not lost hope and you still can hold on. This is fantastic. Great indeed 5/5 all the way

    Fsams