I honestly love it
good work

Wow thank you

Nice piece it was beautiful for the emotions are clear and i can feel it although it was quite confusing.Anyway, like it..Keep it up!

Hey please check on some of my poems too coz i think we somehow feel the same thing.Thanx

Beautiful writing, really full of emotion.

It was great it shows a lot of emotin! has an awesome flow i loved it!

It's a good poem. It flowed nicely.. Just a suggestion to capitalize the I's and use punctuations ^_^

But anyway it's a great poem. Keep up the good work.

Please goodbye don't come back anymore
cos if you dare i will hate you forever
till my last breath away

Very strong and nice poetic lines emphasising you are not lost hope and you still can hold on. This is fantastic. Great indeed 5/5 all the way

Fsams

Wow another truly deep and descriptive poem 5/5

I like you poem

I like this one
(:
and just to let you know.
IM NOT A MAN!!!

you commented on one
of mine and said im a talented young man
hah.
im INSULTED.
:P

You show me how to cry
in a painful agony

i can say it si the phrase that touched me here