Excellently written piece. Flow is great and every stanza is very sad and dark.
My favorite stanzas are the second and the fourth.
This piece is very touching.
5/5 from me.

My friend I want to cry! All the pain you were givin...that you sooo did not deserve one bit of it!!!! I am sending u a big long hug!!! Love you!!!!

Great read Tracy, I really enjoyed this piece.
Phil.